A Love Story

Here is where their story begins,
In a time when they were young,
And they did not yet regret their sins.

A boy whose praises went unsung,
Met a girl who ignored her worth,
And together they climbed on love’s first rung.

But they scaled too quickly from earth,
And when those naïve darlings fell,
They came crashing from their mirth.

They said a bitter-sweet farewell,
And tried to mend their hearts,
But the sadness deep inside did swell.

She knew they could not live apart,
And he knew he could not be her friend,
For her name was inked upon his heart.

They could not a minute longer pretend,
And thus began a new endeavour,
For theirs is a love story with no end.

They’ll climb together forever.

 

napo2014button2This poem was written for NaPoWriMo. Today’s challenge was to write a terza rima; a poem with a rhyming pattern like this: ABA, BCB, CDC, DED etc… I found this a challenge as I couldn’t get my usual flow, but I hope it still works well! Oh, and it was inspired by my own love story and is therefore dedicated to my hubby 🙂

9 responses to “A Love Story”

  1. Lovely, put a smile on my face! Good luck! 🙂

    1. Serena Malcolm Avatar
      Serena Malcolm

      Thank you so much!

  2. Beautiful….definitely made me smile and wish them well!!! Here is mine for today… http://kianadonaepoetry.weebly.com/1/post/2014/04/napowrimo14-day-15.html

  3. Serena Malcolm Avatar
    Serena Malcolm

    Thank you Kiana! Headed your way now…

  4. Serena Malcolm Avatar
    Serena Malcolm

    Thank you both. Hubby and I met 14 years ago and married 4 years ago – I guess that’s so far so good! 😀

  5. Jennifer G. Knoblock Avatar
    Jennifer G. Knoblock

    Good for you! I tried this prompt…for about 5 minutes. Rhyme is not my friend, but you did a great job!

    1. Serena Malcolm Avatar
      Serena Malcolm

      Thank you Jennifer! Usually I love rhyme… mostly. But this one was just weird. Won’t be trying this style again!

  6. Great job Serena, I really enjoyed your poem, especially as it tells your story. I found this form quite a challenge, but I enjoyed it!

    1. Thank you! It certainly was a challenge, but an enjoyable one.

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