A Heart Full of Willow Blossom

I plucked catkins tenderly from a willow,
To show how love captured me when you were born,
I filled the sea endlessly with blonde billows;
No drop unadorned,

They broke the banks, wondrously swathing the land,
With hundreds of heavenly starbursts of gold,
For when you so helplessly searched for my hand,
Your hand found my soul.

napowrimo2015Today’s NaPoWriMo challenge was to write a poem in Sapphics. It’s quite a formal style of poetry with a certain structure and meter (click the link above to find out more). While I’m not sure that I followed the rules perfectly – or even at all – I do like the end result.

6 responses to “A Heart Full of Willow Blossom”

  1. The Bibliophile Diaries Avatar
    The Bibliophile Diaries

    Your words have the ability to transport one to another beautiful world 🙂

    1. Wow thank you. I am touched that you think so 🙂

  2. I haven’t (yet) had the guts to attempt this form (all that talk of dactyls and trochees scare the living daylight out of me), but regardless of whether you nailed it or not this is an absolutely beautiful poem! So lovely!

    1. Thank you CC. It was a real challenge today but it was fun!

  3. Not sure if this challenge is for me…but you pulled it off beautiful!!!!! Love this

    1. Thanks Kiana. Not sure I’ll be using this style ever again but glad I gave it a go! x

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