When We Were Wee

We are friends and friends we’ll be,
A promise made when we were wee,
When we’ve grown old disgracefully,
We’ll dip our toes at eighty-three
in the very water of the very sea
where you first made the pact with me.

You swore to be there by my side,
I swore in me you could confide,
We swore with pinkies intertwined
While our mothers bathed ‘neath sunbaked skies,
We’d bridge a gap an ocean wide
to the wipe the tears the other cried.

Not distance, time, nor life’s debris,
Could break the tie from you to me,
Forged with innocence and surety,
With adamance and purity,
A promise made when we were wee,
We are friends and friends we’ll be.

 

Thisnapowrimo2015 poem was written for NaPoWriMo, but after a long and stressful day at work I did not follow today’s prompt. Hopefully normal service will resume tomorrow!

8 responses to “When We Were Wee”

  1. Oh, it’s really lovely!

  2. oh if only all promises made “when we were wee” could stand the test of time…because it’s often those promises made in the innocence of childhood that are promises worth keeping!

    1. Absolutely Bryan! I remember being young enough to believe in things wholeheartedly – to believe in forever! Innocence is to be cherished, it’s so beautiful.

  3. How else can I say it. Your structure and rhythm on this piece is oh so sweet!

    1. Thank you James. Glad you liked it πŸ™‚

  4. Awww, loved this piece. When we were wee….. ahhh memories. #LoveandInk

    1. Thanks Kiana. I had a smile on my face writing this one! πŸ™‚

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