Bridges

Bridge to Freedom

I hear the melancholy slither of
the stream across the stones,
I feel the dampness of the wood
as it seeps into my bones.

My legs dangle through the railings,
Dried up mud cocoons my knees,
I watch my teardrops salt the water
as I cast secrets to the breeze.

I feel trapped inside this vastness,
Life is closing in from every side,
I’m stifled, stuck, in stasis,
Despite the many roads I’ve tried.

But as I sit here on this bridge,
Where soothing silence scents the air,
I close my eyes and I taste freedom,
And I’m transported anywhere.

 

Bridge to Forgiveness

From here, of course, I see you,
I can almost taste your skin,
But, no, I will not touch you first,
Or you, my love, would win.

You see, there lies between us
a raging river of regret,
And there is no way to bridge it
without someone getting wet.

I confess, the scent of victory
serves to fuel my stubbornness,
So listen up, my darling,
Only you can fix this mess.

So simply say you’re sorry,
Come, we haven’t got all night…
Don’t look at me like that, my dear,
You know I’m always right.

 

napowrimo2015Today’s NaPoWriMo challenge was to write a poem about a bridge. I wrote two today, the first about a physical bridge and the second about a metaphorical one.

5 responses to “Bridges”

  1. Enjoyable, both.
    I thought in the first she might be going to do herself in, but the impression I get at the end is that she is soothed by the environment.
    The second has a lovely whimsical quality.

    1. Funnily enough the first poem was about twice the length and I cut a huge chunk out because I thought it was depressing! Had I have left it it, it probably would have ended in a fatality! Thanks for the comments πŸ™‚

      1. I’m glad you did. This way, it builds forebodings but then gives a gratifying relief when they are not met, so it works really well.

  2. Both are beautifully done. Love the second one the most though.

    1. Thank you Kiana! That’s my favourite too πŸ˜‰

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