Example

My Daddy hitted a man,
There was lots of blood and I sawed
that when daddy hitted the man,
the man went to sleep on the floor,

And daddy had on that face,
Like the one when he hitted my mum
and she cried and cried and cried
and kept asking him what she had done,

But daddy, he said it was fine;
He was grumpy but now he’s OK,
That the man is going to wake up,
That the blood will all go away,

He said “Big Man, don’t worry your head,”
(I like it when he calls me Big Man)
“I just want to take a quick ride
in the back of this cool police van!”

And he promised that he’d come back home
to read me a story, so I can sleep,
But… why didn’t he read one just now
to the man who’s asleep at his feet?

5 responses to “Example”

  1. Powerful. The things that children see…they might not understand, but they will certainly be affected.

  2. Absolutely. And I think sometimes parents can forget that… Even things that aren’t anywhere near as extreme as this poem can have lasting effects.

  3. A poignant story. You are a skillful creator and word manipulator. I applaud your talent!

    1. Why thank you James. That means a lot x

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