#NaPoWriMo Day Five
Today’s prompt was to write a villanelle. It’s a poetic style that is completely new to me and involves repeating two lines in specific places in the poem. As you can see I am late with this one as I had to think on it for the entire day. I hope I have it right!
Sailing
The quiet when the first bird sings
– the first sign of an early spring –
makes my heart sail on the whispered wind,
And memories are glistening
like dew-soaked grass they’re mirroring
the quiet when the first bird sings,
I taste your scent as I breathe in,
And the traces of you, lingering,
make my heart sail on the whispered wind,
The blue-black shimmer of your skin
was all it took to fell me in
the quiet when the first bird sings,
The playful smile that drew me in,
– and the pleasure in remembering –
makes my heart sail on the whispered wind,
But sounds have started shallowing,
And memories are mellowing,
The quiet when the first bird sings
makes my heart sail on the whispered wind.


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